Wow. Haunting page! Nice use of layout.
Thank you, Skorpen!:)
I love the story so far and I love the style, it has a Vincent Van Gogh feel to it.
Hey, thanks for checking it out, NGY.:)
thank you, Jerrie:)
That's a great looking introductory page! It already makes me want to read more, before even knowing exactly what it's about.
The blue hue works really well to create a somewhat eerie and brooding atmosphere. I'm looking forward to seeing where the story takes us...
Really, you can't hear a better comment for an intro page than a reader saying they want to read more!
Great first page!