I do like your rating system. Esp. as applied to my work.:D
Just letting you know I'm here and reading. If I have a more specific comment I will post it. :)
Thanks, I appreciate that.
Enjoying the story so far.
Last panel is great! It really does look like, and make you think of a busy/crowded city street.
I think I may have mentioned this once before, but generally I really like the font you use, except at times when you have a 'cl' next to each other, it looks a lot like a 'd'. You may want to put a space between them in future instalments, or at least see how it looks. :)
Thanks! As for the font, I appreciate your bringing this up as I've grown accustomed to its problems and just don't see it anymore. As readability is highly important to me, I'm going give that a fix.