This concludes Ch. One. I always appreciate your comments. Stay tuned for Ch. Two.
Ah - I had a look on the first: nothing. Glad I looked again... B-)
Thanks for trying again!
I love your use of gray and all the introspection. I re-read chapter 1 tonight and you should be proud of how well it flows, both story and art! Not an easy feat but you did it.
I know you know that this is not an easy endeavor, so I'm especially honored by your comment.
Really loved this first chapter. I can see you struggle with your art at times but it works well enough to support the story which is very strong and well written. Some really lovely art though throughout and imaginative layouts.