SNW 1-5

posted May 27, 2012

SNW 1-5
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8/23/2013, 11:01 PM

christian-a

Funnily enough, I actually know a librarian named Marita who has black hair, and looks a bit like that.

I still love the layouts you use. Even this basic 3 panel layout - you make exciting and interesting!
The only thing I could maybe criticise with this one is with the text in the speech bubbles, and the bubbles themselves, it looks a little more 'jaggedy' compared to the rest of the stuff. Especially when compared to the speech bubbles in the previous comic. I don't know maybe, it's just me.

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8/24/2013, 1:26 PM

anarcha

Wow, I've rarely heard elsewhere of the name 'Marita'. I would be visiting that library where she works to check out a lot -- of, uh, books.:D I know, bad! Sorry!

No, it's not just you. Those pages with '2012' at the bottom remain from an earlier draft when I was going through an over-sharpening phase.

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8/24/2013, 9:10 PM

christian-a

XD

Ah, okay, thanks for clearing that up! :)

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