Good story & artwork. This comic has a nice style.
Hmmm, like it so far. Intriguing start. I like the "done-in-oils" look to the artwork.
Thanks, Bear. The "done-in-oils" thing, I'm glad you like it--just can't help myself.:)
The panel layout on this page really works nicely.
Love the last panel. I really like how you decided to keep the panel 'wavy', as opposed to a perfect square/rectangle, if you know what I mean. It adds a lot more character, in my opinion.
The story too, is really starting to pick up now. Looking forward to finding out what happens.
Playing with panel shapes and suchlike has been risky so I'm glad to hear your response.